Detective Soap!

Hey! Its my first post one here! Who wants to do a Dectectice Soap??

ehhumm DO MY MERMAID OR WOLF LOVE CRIME SOAP!

KK

are you still doing this one?

Yeah!

cool :D could i do this one with you?

Sure you can!

YAY :D sorry 'bout not being on.

Not prob. I guess its the time zones.

and the fact that i'm out alot but now i'm finished going out

Cool. Gotta plot?

Well there's this girl who lives in a small town with her younger brother and messed up mother. She always wakes up to her brother standing at the front door, he always has a dreamy look on his face like something had enchanted him. Often, when he would snap out of his revire, he would tell his sister of a women with long golden blonde hair that reached her ankles, he would tell her about the woman's bright violet eyes and her straight perfect white teeth, then he would tell his sister about her long, flowing floor-length baby blue dress. One night she wakes up to a woman singing, panicked she runs out of her room, searching for her younger brother. When she finds him, and all his stuff missing she falls to the floor in dispair, her mother in hosptial currently and her baby brother missing. She then, later that day calls a detective, who is a bit like Sherlock Holmes except younger and hotter? While he helps the girl find her brother, he can't help but fall in love with her (she should be around 17?) and she falls in love with him. Thats when the clues of her brother lead them to the woods that haunt the back of her house, thats where she see's her brother's favorite teady in shreads on the ground...

could i be the girl or do you want to be?

I'll be the younger brother and detective!

okii! Charries?

Name: Calista Mooncurve

Age: 17

Personality: Sweet, caring, stong, sad..

Name: Jonny Mooncurve

Age: 9



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Name: Detective Dymon Holmes

Age: 19

Personality: Kind, short temper, like sherlock holmes.

cool, should i start? Actually yeah i should xD

Calista listened to the quiet creaks of the old house, the rain was pounding hard against the roof, she knew soon her baby brother Toby would wake up. There was a small crash coming from downstairs, she sighed. Well done Toby, now i've got to clean up that mess you have made. She groaned and dragged herself out of her bed. Caslista lazily walked to her door. Slowly she opened the door, and fell down the stairs. She groaned again, that hurt. Toby would've scared himself with that crash, he probley would've run back to his room...

Once moving again she shoved the door, it was too dark to see a thing. Caslista flicked on the light, then it hit her, Toby's afraid of the dark. Why hadn't he turned on his light when he had woken up? Actually, why aren't all the lights turned on? Caslista bit her lip, despite the fact that Toby is still probley sleeping, still it didn't hurt to panic slightly. She moved towards the bed slowly, she couldn't see Toby's head but the blankets have a breathing lump under it, so surely that must be Toby?

I follow the light down to the basment, the light is that lady I see almost every night. She is so beautiful. She holds out her hand and I reach out to touch it. But she vanishies. "Where am I?"

Calista picked up the edge of the duvet. 1... 2... 3! She flung of the covers and screamed, Toby wans't there! Instead his pillow was there, but how was it breathing? She pushed herself out of the room and stumbled towards the stairs. Whatever it was downstairs, it must've gotten Toby.

"Oh no, not agian!" I say annoyed. I look around and see that I'm in the basment and the door is locked "SIS!" I shout.

She heard Toby call out her, it was faint, and she could barely hear it but it came from downstairs. Calista ran down the hall to the pair of stairs which circled down to the ground floor.



Toby was right where i wanted him...

He was going to be so handsome when he grows up...



and then he'll be mine...

(this is the goddess/women who steals Toby)

Name: Althea

Age:...

"Calista!" I shout "CALISTA!" She's going to ge me. Help! But she is beautiful.

Calista heard his shouts and panicked, was he in trouble? How come mum couldn't hear his cries? She couldn't sleep through that. Calista sped down the stairs but for some reason a sense of dread settled on her shoulders, it was like Toby was already gone, taken away by something...

I moved closer to the handsome little boy, soon, in a few years, we'll be together. And then, no one could stop us. I grabbed him ironly by his arm, and disappeared.